Watch your levels! It's clipping!!
this is potentially a great song but there are several things you need to consider. #1) your levels are clipping especially the kick. #2) i feel like the song needs some pads. #3) the looping melody is too basic. #4) try making it more interesting instead of sounding too monotonous. i'll look forward to improvement. :)
reminds me of the old amiga days
this takes me back on memory lane to the old commodore amiga 500 days!! yay!!!!
nice use of fx!
you really nailed it with the use of fx. but somehow, your drum track is really hiding behind everything--should bring it out more. maybe add some more bottoms and mid range to it. nice composition--has variety. fun to listen to. good job!
Wow thanks a lot! I'll be sure to try and address the issues you mentioned!
eliminate your reverb
if you eliminate your reverb, this song would rule! :D good job!
Is that a REAL guitar?
The guitar sound sounds very REAL! Well, is it?? If not, you've gotta let me in on the secret and tell me which sound module you are using.
I hate to spoil the fun here, but unfortunately it is a real guitar. Sounds good though, eh?
Very well done!
You have good music composition and sound engineering skills. With the limits of digitally produced sounds, you sure know how to put them together very well. You have my respect. Check out some of my audios sometime.
This could be better with better sounds
Only if the instrument sounds were more convincing (instead of sounding "keyboardish"), this tune could then reach its maximum potential. The percussions sound kind of "outside of the mix" meaning it doesn't blend well with the rest of the stuff. You have the right idea composition-wise. Just find better sounds. Keep up the great work!
What did you use to write this?
Man, this sounds quite good. Very nice composition! Keep up the great work! Check out some of my audios and let me know what you think.
I enjoyed it
Reminds me of the Amiga gaming days! :D Cool!
Very nice!
This is very nicely done! The beat drives the whole tune quite well. Nice usage of instruments. The mix is pretty balanced throughout. Keep up the awesome work!
Glad you liked it!
Thanks for the review. :)
Thank you for listening to my music! I'm always glad to share them with you!
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